100 word challenge
It was dark, too dark. I stumbled through the forest, jumping at every slight movement. I was trying to find the wosfuf. The wosfuf was a huge billion eyed monster. It had dark green, scaly, scary, skin . And I was trying to find it. Then something moved at first I thought it was the wosfuf, but it was just a harmless little bunny rabbit, I thought. Then it suddenly had a billion eyes that’s not right then it pounced it turned into the wosfuf. This is the end, I know, it goodbye, but it started licking me.
Interesting work, Aaron. I like the way you used three adjectives to describe the skin. I also like the start. You made the reader infer how you felt because you don't actually say. But "too dark" and "jumping at every slight movement" give us a very good idea how you are feeling.
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteNice Adjectives on the monster.
ReplyDeleteHi Aaron, Nice work.
ReplyDeleteI like the start about the darkness. I also like the way you described the skin.
Keep up the good work,
Harris.
Hi Aaron,
ReplyDeleteGreat work. I liked how you described the wosfuf as having dark green, scaly, scary, skin. Maybe next time you could check where your commas are supposed to be.
Lizzy
Good work Aaron, I like the part where you describe the wosfuf-dark green, scaly, skin.
ReplyDeleteBYE
Hi Aaron
ReplyDeleteI liked the start of the story. And your work is pretty good for 100 words.
I also liked the part where you described wosfuf.
Ni hau Aaron.I'm from Mamaku Hub at GREY MAIN SCHOOL I really like how you described what the hundred word challenge is you should tell us how it felt about it when you were finished.
ReplyDelete