…and I thought “well what a start.” There is two days till the lego exhibition, and I still haven't finished. My team are building a life size model of the mona lisa. We are sooo close. We just have to do the background. Which is very vary hard.
We have now almost finished and have just two pieces left to put on. There done and just in time there are five hours till the exhibition.
Here I am putting the mona lisa on the wall and then in one hour
Hurray it was a success we got one million dollars.
I like the first paragraph describing the construction stage. I thought the ending was a bit flat and dull. No emotion there. You won a million dollars sounds like you had an ice cream.
ReplyDeleteYour wow words are outstanding and you punctuated really nicely.
ReplyDeleteYou have used amazing adjective and your lego sound incredible
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